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Toon World Academy » Industrial Illusions » Industrial Illusions Central » Show Case » Lookie better progress

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1Lookie better progress Empty Lookie better progress Tue Nov 20, 2012 11:14 pm

CryonixHeat

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Lookie better progress M3f68

2Lookie better progress Empty Re: Lookie better progress Tue Nov 20, 2012 11:49 pm

Shane

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Also another thing I didn't mention in the PM is that the flow isn't so great. There is still a bit of flow, but it doesn't help attract your eye. Also, try bluring the background stock a bit. just a little bit though.

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3Lookie better progress Empty Re: Lookie better progress Wed Nov 21, 2012 5:09 pm

Omega.exe

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I can't really see any flow Sad
The splatters don't really help.....
I'd say it's not one of your best 5/10

4Lookie better progress Empty Re: Lookie better progress Thu Nov 22, 2012 4:13 am

yuseifudo33

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also like i told you in da, dont change color of render thats bad, if you say it dont look good with stock find another one e_e

5Lookie better progress Empty Re: Lookie better progress Fri Nov 23, 2012 10:50 am

PhotonDragon12345

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not your best e.e

I dont like the green because it kinda makes your render look different

And to second the other guys' opinions... work on the flow

5.5/10

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